This piece is a truly enthralling experience that entrances you and lets anxiety swell. I don't believe it needs any more excitement; keep the non-resulting tension.
Very cool. I love the way you incorporated a lot of movement in the second half by pouring water into the cup. The fact that the water didn't flow neatly was very interesting, especially when the water overflowed, although I kept waiting for the pills to dissolve. I also wish I could see the original piece, but overall, well done.
Nice choice of music! I think it fits with the piece perfectly especially with the lighting in the beginning. It has a mysterious feel to and it makes you wonder what is going to happen next.
Quite the concept, I thought the music was pretty effective and the overall presentation was well; The pouring of the liquid was a wise choice, because it wasn't too over the top.. [no pun intended.. haha].
The first minute I think is more interesting then the second which seems to be opposite of what others have been but it works either way. The music is what makes it so interesting though more then the video. I also wish you posted the original for context.
Not going to lie, this video is kind of creepy. I'm confused what the original artwork was. Could you post a picture of it? The way you glued the pills made them look like bricks, that really stuck out to me. I agree about the music, nice fit.
I agree with Cody, I thought that the first minute was more interesting than the second one, especially with the way that it fit the music. I thought that using the changes in lighting was an awesome way to tackle the "subtle movement" portion of the assignment.
interesting how you played with lighting in the beginning. i do wish that i could've seen more with the cup, it wasn't as exciting as i imagined it to be.
I think both parts are equally as exciting. didn't like the first song but that may be personal preference. i thought the second song was more effective. i like the cup that you made. i would have liked to see the original piece. i think your piece is successful overall.
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i like how well the two pieces fit together, but i think it's kind of unexciting. i want to see the cup melting or something.
the whole concept of using the pills on the roofie cup was pretty funny..the music mixing is pretty cool as well..nice
This piece is a truly enthralling experience that entrances you and lets anxiety swell. I don't believe it needs any more excitement; keep the non-resulting tension.
Very cool. I love the way you incorporated a lot of movement in the second half by pouring water into the cup. The fact that the water didn't flow neatly was very interesting, especially when the water overflowed, although I kept waiting for the pills to dissolve. I also wish I could see the original piece, but overall, well done.
Nice choice of music! I think it fits with the piece perfectly especially with the lighting in the beginning. It has a mysterious feel to and it makes you wonder what is going to happen next.
Quite the concept, I thought the music was pretty effective and the overall presentation was well; The pouring of the liquid was a wise choice, because it wasn't too over the top.. [no pun intended.. haha].
The first minute I think is more interesting then the second which seems to be opposite of what others have been but it works either way. The music is what makes it so interesting though more then the video. I also wish you posted the original for context.
Not going to lie, this video is kind of creepy. I'm confused what the original artwork was. Could you post a picture of it? The way you glued the pills made them look like bricks, that really stuck out to me. I agree about the music, nice fit.
I really like this. I love the music. I love the cup. The first minute was a little too boring, but the second minute I really loved.
I agree with Cody, I thought that the first minute was more interesting than the second one, especially with the way that it fit the music. I thought that using the changes in lighting was an awesome way to tackle the "subtle movement" portion of the assignment.
interesting how you played with lighting in the beginning. i do wish that i could've seen more with the cup, it wasn't as exciting as i imagined it to be.
I think both parts are equally as exciting. didn't like the first song but that may be personal preference. i thought the second song was more effective. i like the cup that you made. i would have liked to see the original piece. i think your piece is successful overall.
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